Can you help me to correct my grammer and sentences structuers?

I remember last year during the summer holiday, when during vacation, I worked with my dad. My job was to clean up one part of the freight house. It was the most difficult task I had ever performed. The part that I had to clean up was not big, but I had no idea where to start 鈥?I could barely move through the clutter! The dust on the documents was extremely thick, so I had to wear a mask when I was cleaning up. I use vacuum to clean up the dust. When I started the vacuum, the dust were flying every where, because the back side of the vacuum is the exhaust, and it face to the floor. It blow to the dust, I can鈥檛 believe that happened. I felt I was in a smoking room, I try to turn off the vacuum, but I can鈥檛 saw my hand, because the dust were blocking the view, it likes you are in a cloud. So I stop moving, I wait the dust arrest. After that, I walk out the freight house, my white t-shirt was gray, my sweats on my face were stick with dust and I have a gray color of hair. Suddenly I have a good idea come out, I went to rest room to get a wet towel, and wet towel is the best way to clean up the dust. Then I walk back, and keep going to finish my job. However, the worst thing was not the dust, but actually the weather. There was no air conditioning in the freight house and my body was sweating; my shirt and my jeans were drenched with sweat, but I continued on with my task despite how dehydrated I felt.
Can you help me to correct my grammer and sentences structuers?
I remember last year during my summer vacation, I worked with my dad. My job was to clean up a part of the freight house. It was the most difficult task I had ever performed. The part that I was to clean up was not that big, but I had no idea where to start 鈥?I could barely move through the clutter! The dust on the documents was extremely thick, so I had to wear a mask while I was cleaning and to use a vacuum to clean up the dust. When I started the vacuum, the dust went flying every where, because the back side of the vacuum is the exhaust, and it was facing the floor. It blew the dust everywhere, I couldn鈥檛 believe that that had happened. I felt I was in a smoking room. I tried to turn off the vacuum, but I couldn't see my hand, because the dust was blocking the view; like I was in a cloud. So I stopped moving, and waited till the dust arrested. After that, I walk out the freight house. My white t-shirt was now gray, the sweat on my face was streaked with dust and my hair was gray. Suddenly I had a good idea, I went to rest room to get a wet towel to clean up the dust. Then I walked back, and finished my job. However, the worst thing was not the dust, but actually the weather. There was no air conditioning in the freight house and my body was sweating; my shirt and my jeans were drenched with sweat; but I continued on with my task, despite how dehydrated I felt.
Can you help me to correct my grammer and sentences structuers?
I remember working with my dad last year during the summer holiday. My job was to clean up one part of the freight house. Even though the area I had to clean wasn't large, it was the most difficult task I have ever had to perform. I had no idea where to start! The clutter limited my movements. Because the dust was so thick, I had to wear a mask. I decided to use a vacuum to clean up the dust. When I started the vacuum, the exhaust on the back blew the dust everywhere. I couldn't believe my bad luck.





Sorry, that's as much as my brain can take! This one needs some serious work.











I felt I was in a smoking room, I try to turn off the vacuum, but I can鈥檛 saw my hand, because the dust were blocking the view, it likes you are in a cloud. So I stop moving, I wait the dust arrest. After that, I walk out the freight house, my white t-shirt was gray, my sweats on my face were stick with dust and I have a gray color of hair. Suddenly I have a good idea come out, I went to rest room to get a wet towel, and wet towel is the best way to clean up the dust. Then I walk back, and keep going to finish my job. However, the worst thing was not the dust, but actually the weather. There was no air conditioning in the freight house and my body was sweating; my shirt and my jeans were drenched with sweat, but I continued on with my task despite how dehydrated I felt.
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I felt I was in a room full of smoke. I tried to turn off the vacuum, but I couldn鈥檛 even see my hand in front of my face. The dust was so thick, it was like standing in a cloud. So I stopped moving and waited for the dust to settle. After it cleared, I walked out the freight house. My white t-shirt was gray, the sweat on my face was sticky with dust, and my hair would make you think I was an old man. Suddenly I had a good idea. I went to the rest room to get a wet towel to clean up the dust. Then I went back to the freight house to finish my job. From then on, the worst thing was not the dust, but the temperature. There was no air conditioning inside the freight house and I was sweating all over. My shirt and my jeans were drenched, but I continued on with my task despite how dehydrated I felt.
Reply:Last year during Summer holiday, I worked with my dad. My job was to clean up one part of the freight house. It was the most difficult task I had ever preformed. The part that I had to clean up was not big, but I had no idea of where to start; I could barely move through the clutter! The dust on the documents was extremely thick, so I had to wear a mask while I cleaned up. I used a vacuum to clean the dust up. When I started the vacuum, the dust flew everywhere. This was because the back side the vacuum, which is where the exhaust was located, was facing the floor (or faced the floor, which ever you please). It blew the dust around. I couldn't believe that happened! I felt as if I were in a smoking room. I tried to turn the vacuum off, but I couldn't see my hand; the dust was blocking my view. It was like I was in a cloud. Then I stopped moving, and waited for the dust to settle. After that, I walked out of the freight house. My formerly white t-shirt was powdered gray, and dust stuck to the sweat on my face. My hair even looked gray. Suddenly I decide to come out and go to a rest room. I get a wet towel; a wet towel is the best way to clean the dust up. Then I walk back, and proceed to finish my job. The worst aspect of my job was not the dust, but rather the weather. There was no air conditioning in the freight house and I was sweating; my shirt and jeans were drenched with sweat. However, I continued on with my task, despite how dehydrated I felt.

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